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It's incredible the amount of plot holes in Danny Phantom that are easily fixed if only the plot were a little darker.
Like Tucker's fear of hospitals and doctors from Doctor's Disorders, for example.
To be precise, the fact that Danny had apparently no idea that Tucker goes downright catatonic whenever he passes in front of the nurse's office as a result of his fear of anything medical related but Sam did. Especially since Danny and Tucker have known each other for as long as they've known Sam, if not longer.
If the plot were a little bit darker/more mature and didn't shy away from heavy topics like human mortality or that Danny actually died in the accident and came back to (half) life, this would all have a very simple explanation.
Danny didn't know about Tucker's fear of hospitals because it's a recent thing, while Sam does because she was there when it happened.
In other words, if you ask me, Tucker could have developed his fear after Danny's accident. After spending who knows how long inside a hospital waiting for news of his best friend's recovery, with each passing second spent there being a constant reminder of the possibility that Danny might not make it. Thus, his fear would be a result of anything medical reminding him of those agonising times and of the fear he felt at the idea of losing his best friend forever. And Sam would know about it but not Danny because she was right there by Tucker's side as they both waited while Danny was being treated and remained unaware of the world going on around him.
And just like that, you fix a plot hole, and add layers to the story, the characters and their interpersonal dynamics in one fell swoop.
Thank you for coming to my TED-Talk.
#danny phantom#tucker foley#sam manson#danny fenton#doctor's disorders#dp analysis#danny phantom rewrite#nickelodeon#nicktoons#nick#2000s cartoons
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Cheese melt throughout the Infinite Realms
#danny phantom#cheese melt#dani phantom#danielle phantom#vlad plasmius#season 3 rewrite au#always thought it was kinda weird that the only real ''realm'' we see in Infinite Realms is the far frozen#everything else is just vanilla time travel lol
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danny phantom cast explorations and thoughts :v
#🧻 sharts#danny phantom#danny fenton#jazz fenton#danielle phantom#sam manson#tucker foley#i have like. other sketches of other cast members hidden away. maybe ill finish them up but#for now heres my thoughts on the cast! at least how i would do it#i never understood danielle being 12 when danny is 14. MAKE THEM IDENTICAL!!!!! RAAAAH#i have a lot of thoughts about danielle and non of them are canon compliant#i may just be rewriting the lore sorry#danny phantom is like r*wby to me#in which i rewrite the things i dont like#i will say a lot of the things im applying to the halfa’s is from an oc of mine#because i like the concepts and find them fitting#its not stealing if its from myself. its recycling#i think the one thing that keeps kicking me in the ass is danny's suit. its a hazmat suit but its vacuum sealed HAHA#i love both vibes of him in a tight superhero suit and him in a loose hazmat lookin suit with a mask or smth. for the creep factor#idk im figuring out how i would do the phantom alter ego. ywlma has me obsessed w it being elderich and scary though#wow. so many tags! LOL SORRY#guess ill die (danphantom)
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Now presenting:
The Ghosts of Amity Park
Part 1
Tucker and Sam stood in front of the Fenton's house, daring the other to finally knock on the door.
Two weeks had passed since the- incident.
Danny was rightfully upset, but Sam was starting to get impatient.
"It can't be that bad!" She exclaimed.
"For the record, I blame you," Tucker frowned.
"Me!? You're the one that started trying to dissect would could have been wrong with the damn thing!" Sam stomped her foot furiously.
"Yeah but you just HAD to see the lab and what knew stuff his parents were cooking up!" Tucker threw up one of his hands dramatically, "why can't you just boycott like a normal person!?"
"Ectoplasmic radiation is a fascinating energy source that has proven to be both environmentally friendly and efficient, it would be irresponsible for us as a society if we didn't explore all of its capabilities!" Sam snapped, "Its not just about big money and corporate greed!"
"What the hell are you two doing?" The distinct voice of their friend cut through Sam and Tucker's argument and they turned to him in shock.
To say Danny looked like hell was an understatement.
Neither Sam nor Tucker could remember the last time they'd seen Danny without his bracelets or his gloves or even one of his jackets.
It felt wrong, he looked blank. Just a plain white t-shirt Sam never knew he owned a regular pair of washed out blue jeans.
He looked hollow, cheeks slightly sunken, eyes heavy, lips chapped- it felt as though if they were to reach out he would shatter under their touch.
"Danny?" Sam asked, almost convinced it wasn't him.
She knew it had to be.
They were dull, but those ghastly blue eyes still pierced through her very being, making her feel raw and vulnerable.
"Yes?" His voice was hoarse, and Sam wondered if he actually was sick.
"Dude- you uh-"
"I know. I got forced out by Jazz. She's worried," Danny replied blandly.
Oh. He was pissed.
Sam could feel it. The air was legitimately colder as he just stared at them, as though they had insulted him simply with their presence.
"Dude," Tucker sighed, extending his hand out to their friend.
"...asshole."
Tucker nodded, going to retract his hand, but Danny stopped him, latching onto to it weakly. Something akin to relief seemed to wash over Danny as he held onto Tucker's hand.
"We need to talk."
Danny's room was in disarray. Sure, it usually was, but this was different.
It was genuinely unorganized, like he'd pulled everything out while trying to search for something and gave up on putting things back in their original place.
"Whats going on man?" Tucker's voice interrupted the somber silence that had settled over them.
"Its easier to show you...I guess," Danny muttered, pushing himself off of his dresser and moving to the center of the room.
"Something is wrong with me...I think that energy conduit is more than that...like- like a different place," Danny stumbled over his words in effort tit articulate himself, "it changed me."
"What do you mean it changed you?" Sam scrunched her nose in confusion.
Danny looked over at her, but the eyes that glared were not the same blue she had grown accustomed to.
Danny's gaze had become a bright, vicious green that literally glowed like some kind of algae, the ceiling light began to flicker, the air became ice against Sam's skin. Her eyes darted over to Tucker, his gaze rested outside, where even the streetlights were starting to pulse.
"Holy shit."
"You haven't seen the half of it," Danny remarked. Slowly his feet lifted from the floor, and he leaned back slightly, sitting on thin air.
Tucker choked on nothing, "What the fuck!?"
Yeah. That summed it up pretty well actually.
But Sam decided to throw in, "How the fuck," just to get everyone up to speed.
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Part 2
#danny phantom#danny fenton#sam manson#tucker foley#danny phantom rewrite#fanwork#danny phantom fanfiction#sorry for any mistakes#rough draft
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Who Would Win?
Round 4
Madoka Kaname: She's got a magical bow, and can rewrite the rules of the universe
Danny Phantom: Danny has a number of superhuman abilities due to being part ghost including:
Strength
Durability
Agility
Flexibility
Speed
Reflexes
Stamina
Endurance
Equilibrium
Healing
He also possesses Paranormal Immunity which means he is not affected by ghost attacks that would normally harm humans
His ghost powers include:
Transforming into a ghost "Going Ghost"
Intangibility
Invisibility
Flight
Ecto-Energy Manipulation
Energy Absorption
Photokinesis
Electrokinesis
Energy blasts
Ghost Senses
Telekinesis
Fusion
Dream Invasion
Duplication
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I mean- from a Doylist perspective I feel like the situation is probably more from the show as a whole (at least trying to) treat the Portal Accident more like a superhero origin story than a half-death/ an instance of (especially in later seasons) the show being weirdly reluctant to treat the ghosts like ghosts? Like- if you come at the plot of Memory Blank from the perspective of replacing the situation with a different origin story/ “Setting up the events for spiderman’s spider bite”, it does feel like the way the characters react to stuff fits a bit better-
Still, yeah no I agree it’s kinda weird/offputting writing when you approach it from the context of ghosts being. Well, dead/Danny having effectively half-died/Sam effectively convincing Danny to kill himself whether the writers intended it to be or (more likely) not, not to mention the fact it feels weird for her not to show much remorse about the accident/all the characters including Danny being way too nonchalant about the implications of what happened (like, even from a “taking out the ghosts” perspective, this was still an event that had a pretty big impact on Danny’s life-), or the fact that, like you said, in theory the whole thing could’ve just been solved with a wish to undo the previous wish?
Honestly I personally prefer just chalking the whole thing up to fumbled writing over trying to make it make sense with their characterization (plus or minus potentially taking the shiny bits for Fanfic Potential), though Ngl I agree it would’ve been cool to see Sam Phantom even if it was just temporary-
Hey, you know how when Desiree makes it so Danny never died and became Phantom and Sam convinces him to go in the portal again to get his powers back? I get that dying is scary and that she's seen him die and be fine so it's easier to ask him to do it instead of doing it herself. But Danny doesn't remember being friends with Sam (even if she does have a picture as proof that doesn't replace the memories and she's still very much a stranger to this Danny) and has no reason to trust her that he will somehow be okay if he goes in the portal and basically flips the kill switch on himself. So on one hand, while Danny is heroic and selfsacrificing and reckless enough to do it it would also be perfectly believable if he didn't willingly kill himself because some girl told him to and on the other since Sam played a role in his first death (which I imagine would cause quite a bit of guilt) what if she couldn't bring herself to ask that of him again? After all, she took on ghost fighting the moment she realized Danny wasn't going to be of help. And there's nothing saying it has to be Danny who dies. So what if Sam became Phantom? Idk just. Sam saving Danny the pain instead of killing him (again) would be nice. And it makes me wonder how things would go on after that
#danny phantom#sam manson#danny fenton#Yeah no there’s a lot of things with this show that make me wanna do a rewrite/‘this could be different :/‘#and a pretty big one is the relationship Sam/the trio as a whole have to the Portal Accident#times like these I wish the show took itself a bit more seriously/was more willing to be character and story based bc there’s some real pote#-ntial there for interesting discussions/plots/characterization that just. weren’t utilized At All#like. Damn- what could’ve been if this had been approached from the lens of like. Amphibia/ToH/Gravity Falls… 😔#like. Not even super GRITTY/DARK/BLOOD TM but like. Willing to be more genuine/emotional/story-driven sometimes#My Brother’s Keeper is one of my/a lot of people’s favs for a reason ngl-
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Kinda hilarious how we as Danny Phantom fans pretty much collectively agreed to just ignore the Reality Gauntlet. I've been reading fics for years and I've only seen it brought up like once or twice. There's an ancient ghost artifact that can rewrite reality at will and we just went

Yeah it was destroyed but we all dissect and kill canon like it's Danny in these fics so that matters little to us but we just don't and it amuses me
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#These were all my favorites when I was younger then but I got old and realized that we both deserve better#this is just for fun don't take it too seriously#hell posts#supernatural#miraculous ladybug#miraculous tales of ladybug and chat noir#spn#supernatural fandom#danny phantom#descendants#disney descendants#riverdale#voltron legendary defender#vld#detroit become human#dbh#star vs the forces of evil#svtfoe#stranger things#stranger things netflix#tv polls#polls#random polls#tumblr polls#poll time#my polls#nichel poll#poll
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I was looking through some of my old unfinished fanfics- And discovered this one from my old Danny Phantom hyperfixation.
I kinda just pasted the whole thing that I managed here- It’s basically if Jazz got ghost powers instead of Danny, but like- Different I guess?
Enjoy.
PLAZMA-JAZZ
Jazz (Pov)
Jazz had stayed home the day that Danny and his pals decided it would be a grand idea to make their way down to her parents lab. Sure, any other day she would've gone over to the library to study up on schoolwork at this particular plan- In fact, that had been what she would have done that day had no complications come up. However, it was late afternoon, and with her car mysteriously broken down under unknown circumstances, Jazz really didn't feel like walking.
She didn't know why, but she had this deep impending feeling that staying home was her best bet that day.
Of course, she knew better than to listen to unreasonable urges of fear for no obvious reason, but Jazz had a peculiarly long day, and she may as well catch up on some school work from the safety and sanctity of her own home.
The safety and sanctity that of which it should have stayed.
She had initially been focusing on the next 2 weeks of homework she had- When she heard the familiar sounds of her brother and his friends, chatting by the stairs and with hushed voices.
Jazz didn't know why she intervened, but she would never regret it.
“Danny- There is no way you're going in the labs unsupervised- Let alone without permission- That's practically rule number one and two on Mom’s list of laboratory safety!”
She remembered saying this to Danny, who was halfway down the cement stairs to the basement, and both he and his friends were clearly not amused with her attempts to keep them safe.
“Jazz, you need to relax-” He had said, rolling his eyes. “It's not like anything actually works down there.”
“Well… That is true…” Jazz paused before shaking her head and cementing her decision. It was her job as an older sister to make sure her younger brother didn't get hurt when he inevitably did something foolish and childlike. She was like his secondary parents. Sort of. In a way.
“Fine. Ok.” She relented, only for a moment, but only because she knew that Danny was far more reckless nowadays, and disobeying her was practically inevitable. No matter how hard she tried, she was most certainly NOT his parent. Besides, all she wanted was for him to be ok. She could make sure of that.
“-I know I can't stop you guys-”
Danny and his friends visibly brightened at the thought of her giving up and going away, but she would not falter. She may be a tad bit lenient, but not too much so that she was simply going to let the three 14 year olds go inside a dangerous laboratory with no regards for anything beyond them.
“But, I'm going with you guys. There's NO WAY I'm letting you mess around in mom and dads lab without proper supervision.”
Jazz had tried to ignore the whispers between her brother's friends- Words like ‘Buzzkill’ and ‘stick in the mud’ passing between them, but Jazz let it phase through her without a second thought.
She would take being a stick in the mud any day over the guilt of letting her brother get hurt.
And so, despite being not exactly how she wished to spend the rest of the evening, Jazz shrugged on her own protective bodysuit, modeled slightly after her mothers seeing that she was a growing young lady and her body was maturing. (Although she didn't forget to peel off the weird velcro sticker of her fathers face-) Despite the extreme doubt anything bad would happen, she decided on wearing the suit anyways, the 3rd most important rule of lab safety, protection just in case- She even went as far as to tie her long reddish orange hair back into a loose low ponytail.
After all, no loose hair in a lab either. She learned that lesson when she was 5 years old and dipped her hair in places it didn't belong. Irrelevant now though-
All in all, that is how she ended up being somewhat like a shadow in the background, watching the 3 14 year olds carefully as they dropped the wariness of Jazz being near and simply pretended she wasn't even there. Goofing off as normal kids do. It only made Jazz a tad bit jealous. She remembered being only slightly bitter watching them act so carefree. But she had also been glad for them. She was glad that they were enjoying being children, being little kids a little while longer-
-SAFELY of course, Jazz had thought, remembering the sharp look she gave the so-called defective inactive fenton portal.
In a household full of insanity and craziness, Jazz had to grow up fast. Somebody had to be the voice of reason after all.
But of course, even the most reasonable of people make mistakes, and at some point during the short lab tour, Jazz made her first error.
She had decided to take her eyes off of the 3 teens for a split second decision to multitask on some digital assignments, going as far as to utilize the Fenton family computer that just so happened to be located on her parents' nearby workbench.
It was a mistake for her to draw her attention away from the 3 foolish teenagers. Putting blind trust in a trio of freshmans is never the right way to go- And Jazz remembers the dropping feeling in the pit of her chest as she drew herself away from the computer at the sound of shuffling fabric and velcro peeling off of fabric.
“WHAT in the WORLD do you think you're doing!?!?” She had exclaimed, eyes blown wide with complete shock at the thought of what her brother had planned to do- Investigating the portal?! It was still experimental, the entire idea was foolish, to an extreme. She really thought her dear brother was brighter than this.
Even so, the raven headed boy only rolled his eyes at her with a small scoff, likely expecting her reaction to a point and shrugging, his own black accented and white base colored bodysuit moving as if it were a second skin as he blew her panicked words away.
“It's not like it works, Jazz, remember? So what's the harm in exploring?”
“Danny- While it may not have done what Mom and Dad intended for it, it's still super EXPERIMENTAL- You could get seriously hurt! Honestly Danny, you should know BETTER than to act like this!”
Jazz recalls how Danny bristled at this, squaring his shoulders as his baby blue eyes narrowed and he planted his feet firmly to the ground. Scowling, he retorted back with his hands raised with infuriation.
“To act like what-? An IDIOT? Newsflash Jazz, not EVERYONE is as smart as you.”
Taking a step closer to her younger brother- Unknowingly urging the younger boy to take a step back towards the portal- Jazz tried to mediate the conversation, but getting harder with how distanced her brother was getting.
“Danny! That is NOT what I'm saying. You are smart Danny! But there is a difference between being stupid and acting stupid- And listen to me when I say that going into that portal is a stupid idea!”
She tried not to yell, really she did. But you can't change memories- And Danny only seemed to be getting more irate by the second, eyebrows scrunching as he scowled, taking a few more steps back towards the portal. It was then, she recalled, something flashed in his eyes. An idea. Jazz had doubted it was anything good.
“You'll see Jazz- You have nothing to worry about!”
Luckily for Jazz, her reflexes from years of dodging ecto-contaminated dinners coming in handy for in a split second- Danny shoved her away and made a run for the portal, a big spiteful grin on his face while he did so. But Jazz was faster by just enough, arms darting forth to grasp her brother’s arm in a vice grip, and her teal eyes blazing now.
She had a long day, and all of it- The car breaking down, the pressure of school, and the STUPID sinking feeling in her gut- It all came crashing down. Jazz was irritated now, equally so, and with this in mind, she sunk back down to a lower level. She couldn't help but yell, tugging her brother's arm back towards her, while he held his ground.
(Perhaps, had she been paying more attention outside of her brother, she would have noticed how both Sam and Tucker, Danny’s friends, seemed to shake their heads in disappointment with how the evening was progressing. Sam, being particularly disappointed, and Tucker showing mild interest in how the interaction would end. Jazz doubted, had she been paying attention at the time, she would have cared.)
“Your acting immature!”
“And you're acting like a helicopter parent on STEROIDS! Let go of me!”
Tugging on his rubber gloved covered arm with her own suited limbs, she pulled back on him away from the device with a shake of the head, her red hair- Tied back into a low ponytail because having loose hair in a lab was also a no no- Hair flipping back and forth as she struggled to pull the younger boy away.
“No! You're endangering yourself and everyone else here- Stop fighting and get away from the portal!”
“Make me Jazz- What are you going to do? Lecture me away from it!?”
At this point, looking back, Jazz knew that the whole thing had escalated to a tipping point, into a terrible sibling spat. It's been a while since they have had one this bad… She knew that at this point, she should have regained her bearings and taken the role of the respective older person in the room, de-escalating the situation, as she should have a while ago…
But she had not been in the right mindset that day. She had been reduced to the same childlike level as her brother, and her demeanor was out of control. Everything, all the pressures and annoyance had crashed down on her, leaving her cool and collected mindset behind- Making her sensitive and vulnerable to sibling attacks. Danny knew just what buttons to press. But she didn't care about this at the time.
From her perspective, Danny never really wanted to go inside the portal- It likely had been one of her friends' ideas- And NOW, because she insisted otherwise, he wanted to go inside the portal just to hurt her. It wasn't fair, and she will admit that it made her mad. Her emotions were running high, and both Sam and Tucker were long forgotten.
All that mattered to her was to get back at her little brother and make him SEE-
So, when Danny shoved her- She shoved back.
“Danny- Listen to me-”
“Why do you always have to be in my business Jazz?! Don't you have better things to do- Like studying for the ‘I'M A TOTAL STUCK UP’ test?!”
“Argh! I'm in your business because I CARE for you!” Sniffing slightly, Jazz tried to swing Danny around so that he would be on the side closest to the door, but her efforts remained futile as he wrestled her back- (Unknowingly, the two of them only grew closer and closer to the gaping maw of the deactivated portal itself. She never should've let them down there. That portal was d a n g e r o u s…)
“And I am NOT a STUCK UP!”
“Are…” Danny paused to shove Jazz again- Face screwed in annoyance and exhaustion. “TOO!” He finished his sentence with a loud shout and another shove, but Jazz was ready this time, taking the opportunity to tackle him under the arms, but while this move had succeeded, her efforts to drag him away from the portal were still futile. Kicking and elbowing, Danny weaseled his way out of her grip with a fierce scowl, somehow the duo making their way inches from the lip up to the portal.
Funny thing about Fentons- They never backed down and were stubborn as bulls. Neither party would go down without a fight, as silly as it was for Jazz to admit. She really had been acting foolish- The world likely punished her accordingly…
Gripping her brothers wrists tightly, she began to walk forward with Danny walking backwards, both too busy in their squabble to notice how they stepped up onto the ledge leading to the portal and where making their way inside the dark abyss of the machinery itself.
She should've noticed sooner.
“Danny! Just! Stop it!”
“No you stop it Jazz! You're embarrassing me in front of my friends!!!”
“You’re IMPOSSIBLE Danny!”
(Meanwhile, Sam and Tucker slowly begin to approach the portal where the two siblings continue to fight, Tucker audibly wishing he had brought popcorn and Sam punching him in the shoulder in response. Sam wonders vaguely if they should step in before things go sour. If only she stepped in sooner-)
At this point, both Jazz and Danny seemed to devolve into dirty tactics, with Danny kicking at her knees and Jazz pushing him harshly out of the way in hopes of swinging him out of the portal. Pretty much atomic at this point, Danny was reaching a blowing point, and the opposite for Jazz, who finally was beginning to come to her senses.
They were in the portals deactivated gaping maw- She had to get them out. The machinery was dark and cold, she had to-
Danny shoved her abruptly once again, further into the portal but close enough to the edge that they could just as easily get out- They wrestled while standing a little longer, white and black meeting blue and black, and baby blue meeting cyan.
Danny reached the tipping point, and Jazz practically could see his brain blow up from behind young, irrational eyes.
“ARGH!!! JAZZ- SOMETIMES I THINK I JUST HATE YOU!!!”
“...”
…Danny’s eyes widened exponentially as he managed to weasel an arm out of Jazz’s now limp grip, and placed a hand on his mouth as if to reverse the words that came out of it.
The world felt frozen for a second. In the background, both Sam and Tucker’s mouths agape with shock, eyes darting between their friend and his sister as if debating their own reactions.
… Jazz couldn't breathe. Once again- Emotions clouded her judgment, hand hovering over her slightly agape mouth as her eyes began to water slightly.
“You. You…”
She knew he didn't mean it. He couldn't. But how dare she let this escalate to the point where he felt the urge to say such a thing. Danny didn't take it back either. He only stood there, frozen just as she had been as they both took steps back away from each other. The white and black jumpsuit wearing 14 year old seemed to wilt under her gaze, cyan eyes which had begun to soften at the sight of him.
“I-”
His voice died in his throat and Jazz straightened up to take another step back- To create more distance between them, the silence in the air thick enough to qualify as the fenton family fudge-
But the funny thing about the portal was that it was particularly narrow for all rights and purposes… Nowhere really to back up into except-
“Oh… I'm so sorry Dan- DANNY!!!”
Jazz hadn't thought. Hand clicking a button from behind her, she heard the faint beginnings of a whir sound, signaling the portal being turned on. Danny, Danny looked terrified- A spark of green illuminating his pale face as the color drained from the both of them.
Jazz had not thought.
She moved before she could even process what she had been doing.
She couldn't let her brother get hurt.
Not on her watch.
No.
She was his big sister.
Practically his parent.
And parents had a duty to keep.
“JAZZ!!!”
She put her everything into the push- Shoving the younger boy out of the portal so hard, he practically tumbled into both Sam and Tucker as if they were pins in a bowling alley. Jazz would've been close behind, but somehow in all the scuffle, her foot got tangled in a pile of wires.
Danny tried to get to her, but Tucker and Sam held him back.
The portal hissed now with beginning power- And Jazz got that feeling. That sinking feeling. The same one she had felt when she woke up that morning. That same one she felt the rest of the day. A single split second slowed into hours as she attempted to free her foot from her tangled up bindings, furthermore tripping in the process.
She. Was. Stuck.
She had so much left to live for.
Who was going to drive Danny to school in the mornings?
Who would be the one to make second dinners when the food prepared by her parents inevitably came alive and attempted to murder them?
Who would be the one to tell Danny that he should work on his homework?
Who was going to be the one keeping this family from falling apart?
Who?
That didn't matter.
It would be fine. It had to be.
The portal isn't working- Remember? Logically it wasn't going to- It couldn't-
In those few seconds, Jazz could see Danny and his two other friends, standing just outside the portal with faces pale and reflecting an eerie green glow as the portal sparked a tad bit more- Jazz only let out a breath, hot and smoky somehow as she extended her arm out in a final attempt to escape.
In a split second, fire entered her veins-
Then everything turned green.
And
She
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A
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E
D…
Who knew dying felt so terrible?
She knew better now.
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Danny (Pov)
“Jazz…?”
Danny’s emotions were completely out of whack, that was for sure. It made sense, after all, everything had gone so fast. Deciding to go down to the labs. Putting the dumb fenton hazmat suit on. Deciding to go inside the portal… Fighting…
T̶e̶l̶l̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶o̶n̶l̶y̶ ̶p̶e̶r̶s̶o̶n̶ ̶i̶n̶ ̶h̶i̶s̶ ̶f̶a̶m̶i̶l̶y̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶h̶a̶d̶ ̶a̶l̶w̶a̶y̶s̶ ̶b̶e̶e̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶r̶e̶ ̶f̶o̶r̶ ̶h̶i̶m̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶h̶e̶ ̶H̶A̶T̶E̶D̶ ̶h̶e̶r̶-̶
“I didn't mean it, Jazz… I- I didn't mean it…”
This couldn't be real. It couldn't be.
Jazz never did have a knack for practical jokes.
For some reason it was hard to breathe.
Sam and Tucker looked no less horrified, their vice grip on his arms practically going limp as he slumped out of their hold and to his knees, his blue gaze never once leaving the swirling green portal that had been where his sister once stood.
He never heard her scream like that before, let alone at all really.
Jazz had always been good at covering her true emotions with a smile to protect him. To make him feel safe.
Heart beating in his ears as he stared blankly at the portal, casting an eerie glow on his pale face, he no longer felt safe anymore.
Jazz was….
Dead.
Probably.
No. She couldn't be.
Right?
He told her that he hated her and didn't even apologize for it. He didn't even take it back. His last words to her were absolutely rotten- The worst thing he could have ever said. All for what, to push her buttons?
It didn't help the fact that this only happened to her because of him.
Because of him.
Him.
̶I̶̶̶t̶̶̶ ̶̶̶w̶̶̶a̶̶̶s̶̶̶ ̶̶̶s̶̶̶u̶̶̶p̶̶̶p̶̶̶o̶̶̶s̶̶̶e̶̶̶d̶̶̶ ̶̶̶t̶̶̶o̶̶̶ ̶̶̶b̶̶̶e̶̶̶ ̶̶̶h̶̶̶i̶̶̶m̶̶̶ ̶i̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶p̶o̶r̶t̶a̶l̶-̶̶̶ ̶̶̶
“I'm sorry… I'm sorry Jazz… I didn't me-ean it… I didnt…” Speaking now felt like there was cement in his throat, and something hot and salty dripped down his cheeks from his wide blue eyes, past his mouth and under his chin. The sound of the portal whirring was too much sound stimulation for him at the moment. The chipped black fingernail painted hand resting on his shoulder felt like the weight of a thousand hammers- And he could practically feel Tuckers trembling from here.
Like a dam being broken, Danny flinched violently, teeth clenching loudly and in a bout of morbid devastation, he stood on shaky knobbly knees, not yet processing his actions. His blue eyes never left the swirling green death device as he managed a few steps forward, slow muttering of manic apologies tripping over his tongue as Sam’s hand slipped off his shoulder and hit her skirt with a resounding fwump. A wave of terror washed over the three fresh teens, Danny taking another shaky step in the portal's direction as Tucker’s voice broke the air.
“We… Your sister… Danny we just saw your sister DIE- How are you-”
“Tucker!” There was probably a punch to the arm that followed, Tucker being the most precipitated recipient, but it was likely it held no strength and either way Danny could not hear it.
All he could hear was the static sound of the portal and the echoing scream of his only sister.
“She. She isn't. She can't be- She can’t- She isnt de-Heh-” He couldn't finish the sentence without clamping a hand over his mouth and withholding a gag at the thought. He couldn't breathe. He didn't WANT to breathe. Not when the sickeningly sweet, yet sour smell of burnt human flesh still permeated in the air.
His fault.
His fault she was-
His stiff zombie-like stagger turned into a shaky speed walk- Eyes wide and unblinking still as he continued his approach towards the swirling green portal. He was close enough now to touch. Close enough to see. To see…
A sharp pain in his eyes caused him to gasp loudly and cover them with an arm, the other arm quickly being grasped and held firmly by a pair of pale hands- Sam having come up behind him once it dawned on her what Danny was trying to do.
“Don’t. Don't look.” Her voice was firm, but her grip was shaky, and Danny ripped his arm away with ease, blinking harshly from lack of blinking before refixing his stare towards the swirling green tear in reality. He needed to see. His morbid thoughts seemed to swirl in his mind as the possibilities churned inside.
What exactly would he see? What was left?
̶T̶h̶i̶s̶ ̶w̶a̶s̶ ̶w̶r̶o̶n̶g̶.̶ ̶T̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶w̶a̶s̶ ̶s̶u̶p̶p̶o̶s̶e̶d̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶b̶e̶ ̶h̶i̶m̶-̶
“Jazz. Jazz. I'm sorry, I just-”
“Ngh…”
All three of them froze.
A sound. From inside the device.
The slumped figure in the portal moved, shifting from where it lay unmoving.
It seemed to find its footing before stumbling a bit, obviously very disoriented as it leaned up against the wall of the portal in a very vulnerable position.
Something was inside the portal.
Moving.
Towards them.
Danny could feel something in his chest soar-
Backing away, Sam and Tucker once again attempted to coerce Danny away from the portal, but he simply wouldn't- COULDN'T- Draw his eyes away from the flickering figure.
Could it be?
Was that…
Hope?
Or was it…
Fear?
“Danny- Get away from there!- There's something-”
Sam didn't have time to finish her shout before the figure stumbled out of the portal with wobbly feet, its tall figure lunging forward to grasp on something, anything to break its fall. A loud whooshing sound permeated throughout the room as the blur of SOMETHING practically tumbled into Danny, who happened to break the rather solid seeming things fall exponentially.
“Gah…” Rubbing his bonked head sorely, he positioned himself up again to a sitting position, the figure which had barreled into him attempting to bring itself to its knees as well, Danny’s own eyes casting upwards to meet its own…
In an instant, the blue eyed, ravenette couldn't breathe again.
The figure, female it seemed, had bright lighting blue neon hair pulled into a low ponytail, almost ethereal looking as she stared at him with bright reddish orange ectoplasmic eyes. She seemed to blink down at him with such confusion.
She wore a bright orange jumpsuit with white accents and a pair of orange goggles hung loosely on her neck. Face slender and a nose just like his own, Danny couldn't help but breathe out her name with a stifled sob.
“Jazz?”
“Danny? What…” The ghostlike person hesitated a second, pulling herself up to standing position, she put a hand up to swipe away a stray hair escaping her ponytail- Only to freeze at the sight of her newly white colored gloves and brightly colored glowing hair. She stared at Danny and his friends with such genuine confusion, with her glowing reddish orange eyes shining brightly as she did so.
Gulping loudly, Jasmine Fenton, half ghost, half human psychiatrist hopeful, as well as established older sister- Had to take a few steps back.
“What… Happened to me?...”
Danny tried his hardest not to cry- But was greatly unsuccessful.
After all, it was that night when everything changed…
That was the night his big sister, his only sister, died a death that didn't belong to her…
Kinda.
***Chapter start:***
“-Despair evaporates when we stop denying who we really are attempt to uncover and accept our true nature- However-”
Jazz Fenton felt a sharp jab to her side, startling her out of her ambient morning reading, red hair flipping to the side as to face the perpetrator head on, swiveling where she sat by the kitchen counter.
“Psst! Hey!” Her brother, Danny Fenton, hissed loudly- Leaning forward in his chair in a clear attempt to grasp her attention, waving his arms a tad and such. Jazz could only frown and glance him over quizzically, wishing to get this over with so she could go back to reading the wise and thought provoking words of Nigel C. Benson- Author of the current psychology book she was reading to clear her head for the day.
“What? What is it?” She stage whispered horribly back- To which her brother stared at her with wide blue eyes- Waving his hands around and glancing about frivolously- Before grimacing nervously, furrowing his brow almost hesitantly and pointing up at his face with both hands.
“Your uh- Your face is uh-”
Danny cast a few more furtive glances in the direction of their mother, Maddie Fenton, who seemed to be working on some sort of device at the dinner table- Blow torch illuminating her mask covered face in an almost haunting way.
Jazz was confused for a moment, before it dawned on her- Chills running up her spine as she glanced over quickly in the direction of the nearest reflective object- This being a toaster and-
“Gah!” Low and behold, Jazz’s head was completely invisible! She tried to shake the transparency away with a frantic shake of her head- Which worked somehow, but it also succeeded in mussing up her normally smoothly brushed out red hair. Even so, she was glad for the warning- Facing her brother again with a concerned expression painting her face, she gestured upwards in hopes that all of her top half was now fully visible and she didn't miss a spot- Danny sent her a wink and a dorky thumbs up, while her only response was to smile thinly and sweat drop the tiniest bit.
“Thanks Danny-”
“Itph nophin relleh-” Danny scooped another spoonful of cereal into his mouth whilst speaking, spattering milk and food bits everywear as he shrugged and Jazz cringed away begrudgingly with a painted smile. Boys- Ain't it so?
She was glad for her brother nonetheless- Getting caught invisible by their parents certainly would NOT end well- That was for sure…
Jumping upwards, the two siblings watched with almost casual expressions as Maddie Fenton leaped from her seat at the dinner table with a bright grin, hands on her hips while doing so and nodding firmly at the sight of her latest creation.
“Okay! All it'll take is about 2 or so days- And it's done!”
“What did you say?” Leave it to Jack Fenton, their father, to pop out of the woodwork at the sound of an invention being proclaimed. Maddie Fenton seemed to want to say something to the disastrous behemoth of a man- But he was a bit too quick and excitable for her. Both Jazz and Danny sweat dropped at the sight of the older male sweeping the device off the table, out of his wife’s reach, in order to display the invention outwards towards the ceiling dramatically as if it were baby jesus.
“Is it done? IT'S DONE! The Fenton Finder is done!!!”
Shaking the device slightly in the air- Or was it his arms simply trembling from keeping them up for so long- He let out a hearty laugh and brought the device closer to his abdominal area in order to flick on a few switches and press a button or two to activate the device. Proudly, he pointed a finger upwards in a matter of factly position… Much to the ire of his wife.
“This baby uses only the most high end, Fenton Family patented, satellite technology to lead us to any ghost in the vicinity- Rain or shine!”
“It uses what to track what?” Danny raised a dark eyebrow and tilted his head at the sight of his father stroking the device close to his face- Maddie seemingly accepting the situation for what it is and allowing a smile to ghost onto her face as well. She seemed to swoop in after Jack, leaning over his arm in order to press one more button on the back, causing an automated voice to emanate from the device- Paired with the small tiny signaling dish to swivel around like a spinning dog.
Jazz shuffled in her seat awkwardly- While Danny leaned forward a bit more to gain insight.
>Welcome to the FENTON FINDER™ A ghost is near. WALK FORWARD<
The automated voice reverberated through the room as the two adults walked in unison, following the beeping noise of the Fenton Finder™ with great anticipation- Meanwhile, Jazz gulped loudly- Closing her book for the time being and a sliding it to the side in order to pay careful attention to the situation at hand.
>WALK FORWARD<
The beeping grew louder as both the parents stepped closer and closer in Jazz’s direction- In only a few seconds, the red haired 16 year old was practically nose to chest with a neon orange hazmat suit- Cyan eyes glancing bashfully upwards to meet bright blue eyes. Sweat practically pouring from both she and Danny’s heads by the bucket full.
Beeping a few times, the Fenton Finder™ spoke once more.
>Ghost Located. Thank you for using the FENTON FINDER™ Dispose of THE GHOST immediately<
Taking a step back, both Maddie and Jack glanced at each other quizzically, Jazz and Danny both watching the two adults with rapt attention- Panic clearly painted on their features while Jazz fiddled nervously with her fingers.
Jack Fenton hummed dopily, giant thumb coming to pinch his chin with confusion.
“What? Oh that can't be right…”
“Well honey- I did say it would be finished in a few days- Not now… Its not finished yet-”
Jazz let out a breath of hot air, tension leaving her body as it began to fluctuate a few times, much to the terror of her brother who could only stand beside her as in a span of a few seconds, Jazz went invisible, intangible, floaty, and glowy all in a quick succession before returning to a normal human state. Albiate, a tad bit disoriented.
Shaking her head with a furrowed brow, Jazz faced the two adults solemnly as she placed a normal hand on her nearby psychology book- Danny looking on with an unreadable expression.
“Actually… Mom? Dad? I have something extremely important I need to tell you-”
“Oh GEEZ look at the TIME!!!” Jazz is taken aback alongside her parents at the sound of two hands slamming onto the counter abruptly- Danny coming to a standing position with both his arms either side in front of him and a giant nervous grin etched onto his features like a really uncomfortable statue. Pushing back out of his seat quickly and wrapping an arm around Jazz’s own empty arm, he let out a forced laugh- Wagging a finger for extra emphasis for his words.
“Look- This chat has been GREAT- But it's time for Jazz to drive me to school!!! After all- You know how it is! Nowadays, a young, growing, adolescent teenager like myself can't afford to be late for school- You know, and miss out on all that great knowledge and brain stuff! You know me- I love school! School school school!!!”
“Danny what-” Jazz didn't have time to finish her sentence, before she found herself being dragged off and out the door by the younger sibling of hers- Leaving both their parents in a state of confusion- Watching on as Danny abruptly shoved Jazz out the door with a giant fake smile and rambles pouring from his mouth like a sprinkler.
“C'mon Jazz- Let's GO- See you guys later- Love you guysgottogoBYE!”
Jazz no longer tried to resist as Danny practically dragged her into the driver's seat- Slamming her car door with such force, she couldn't help but fumble out of her seat slightly. Even so, once Danny was buckled in the passenger seat- She let out a breath she didn't know she was holding and put her key in the ignition…
Meanwhile- Inside the house and watching the bizarre behavior of their children through the living room window, Maddie and Jack Fenton could only tilt their heads and ponder away.
Maddie let out a loud hum, her glove covered dainty fingers coming upwards to tap against her chin with an inquisitive look on her face.
“Huh. That's… Odd. Danny is almost never this excited to go to school… He's been acting so strangely lately…”
“There can only be one explanation…” Jack paused for a moment before a light in his brain blinked on and he raised a finger in exclamation- Much to his wife’s confusion.
“That's not our little slacker! That's a ghost! In DISGUISE!”
“Jack- That’s- OH! That would explain how the Fenton Finder picked up an ecto-signature!”
Maddie’s eyes seem to widen from behind her goggles with this observation, now facing her husband with equal vigor coinciding with her own exclamation. The both of them now seemed to meet each other's gazes, speaking in unison.
“That means…”
Jack was the first to pounce towards the front door- Rocking his fist in the air as if in retribution and his other hand reaching over to his zipper pocket to grasp the keys to the Fenton Family Ghost Assault Vehicle- GAV for short. Maddie followed him close behind as Jack bellowed to the open air.
“Never fear Jazzy!!! We’ll save you from that ghost scum!!! Daddy’s little princess!!!”
***
“I just don't see the appeal in keeping it a secret Danny- Mom and Dad love us, and they would never do anything to hurt me…”
“... On purpose you mean.”
Jazz didn't make eye contact with her black haired teenage brother in the passenger seat beside her, in favor of keeping her cyan blue eyes on the road- Steady foot on the gas pedal as her hands gripped the steering wheel firmly. Fiery orange hair whipping out behind her, and messy black bed head hair doing something similar, the two teenagers seemed almost normal sitting in the seats of the open topped red convertible.
Despite the clear distast in the open air concerning the conversation, Danny Fenton took Jazz’s silence as a signal to keep going, leaning forward in the convertible’s passenger seat to level his older sister with a blank unamused stare, though the slight curling of his lips betrayed the initial deadpan expression he had been aiming for.
“It's been a month, Jazz. A month, and I don't really see you jumping for joy at the opportunity to tell them that their only daughter isn't exactly the most human nowadays. You're not ever going to tell them, are you?”
“I am going to tell them!” Jazz sounded indignant before her eyes flickered off to the side slightly, her soft pink lips curling downwards a tad more into a frown. It almost seemed like she was convincing herself of this fact, sweat beading near her temple as she shifts her hand placement on the wheel, and a sigh billows from her lungs.
“... Eventually.”
“Rrrrrrriiiighhht.” Danny leaned back into his seat with a cross of his arms and a lazy smirk painting his expression. This makes Jazz face the boy again, this time with an extra determined look on her face.
“No really- I will!”
“It's fine Jazz, you don't have to explain yourself. I get it. No reasonable superhero wants to reveal their secret alias to their parents- It's expected even!” Jazz could only frown curiously at Danny’s words, face curling into a processing expression, before glancing over at Danny fondly again and turning the wheel at the next intersection.
“Hero ali- Danny. I'm not a superhero. These aren't superpowers, these are just the aftereffects of the accident, that's all. They will fade in time, I'm sure…”
“Again. Been a month. I think we're past the point of ghostly refunds.”
Jazz and Danny met eyes again, before the orange haired 16 year old halfa shook her head and stopped for another intersection, lifting the lever for her blinker and the dashboard began to click, signaling she was to be turning right. She could only sigh at her brother's antics, noting how pleased he looked in his theorem.
“Still. Not a superhero Danny- Who would I even battle against? The only ghosts we've seen come out of the portal are those weird octopus thingies- But even then, putting those guys back in the portal does not exactly count as an epic superpowered battle like it does in your video games.”
“Well- These kinds of things don't just HAPPEN to a person for no reason! You have superpowers Jazz- REAL superpowers. It's a only a matter of time before bad guys start to show up- And let's be real, Mom and Dad are NOT ready for that kind of confrontation, so it's gonna be up to you to beat em’ back to the front lines”
“Yeah right Danny. Besides, unlike your comic book heroes, I much prefer to fight my battles passively. After all-” Jazz waggled a finger condescending with her free hand in the direction of Danny, a calm preening smile grazing her features while she did so.
“-Words have power too y'know.”
“Right.” Danny flashed a thin smile in Jazz’s direction, leaning forwards a bit to squint blankly in her vicinity. Feigning innocence, he tilted his head in false condescension.
“I'll have to remember that when an evil, all powerful ghost kidnaps me and tries to eat my face off or something..”
Cyan colored eyes flickering upwards, Jazz noted the stoplight in the distance- The school was getting closer, halfway there, she figured. Getting closer to the stoplight, now turning yellow, she moved her foot from the gas over to the brake pedal, getting ready to ease down on it, but not quite putting pressure. Concerning the conversation between her and her younger brother, the red head only shrugged playfully and rolled her eyes fondly.
“Well, I guess we're just going to have to cross that bridge when we get there. And for the record, I DO plan on telling Mom and Dad about my situation- I just… I think it would be best for everyone if i got these new abilities in check beforehand… I mean- I could barely control them as it is-”
“You've been doing just fine right now...”
Jazz let out a noncommittal hum in response to Danny's short notation, but didnt grace him with another retort, now beginning to press down onto the brake pedal, seeing that a busy yellow stop light was coming up. It was true, throughout this whole drive, Jazz had been yet to fall ill to any of her current ghostly attribute issues- The thought made her lip curl upwards. Perhaps she finally found her anchor, allowing her ghost powers to settle and stay dormant under her skin, driving the answer? That didn't sound right, but neither did ghost powers in general…
Who was she to look a gift horse in the mouth, coming up on the stoplight, speed now starting to gradually diminish, she had to admit it was true- Her ghost powers were not acting out throughout this whole drive… Was it luck or happenstance? She didn't know…
She just hoped thinking this in her mind wouldn't…
Jinx….
It…
Jazz suddenly felt a buzzing feeling in her leg, the hot resting bubble of feeling in her chest soaring as her heart dropped into her stomach.
“Jazz…” Danny’s blue eyes flashed nervously in her direction, speaking with a small lilt in his voice, pushing himself back in his passenger seat as the car continued onwards closer to the next stoplight intersection, showing no signs of stopping as Jazz punched her foot down frantically.
“Jazz- There's a stoplight coming up- Jazz, we should stop-!”
Danny glances over to the driver frantically, only for his expression to shift into one of terror, the sight of his sister beginning to phase straight through the bottom of her seat and holding onto the steering wheel for dear life causing him to lurch forwards with an alarmed yelp.
“Jazz!!!”
“Danny! Danny pull me up!!! Pull me up!!!” Jazz could only screech as the stoplight grew closer, only a few feet away as the car began to swerve, her younger brother Danny now beginning to claw at her shoulders in an attempt to yank her back out of the car cushions and into sitting position. He wasn't the most successful, and Jazz's bottom half continued to remain intangible, cushions now up past her chest, arms fully extended and clutching onto the steering wheel for dear life.
“Ah!- Ah!- Break!!! Break- Where-”
“LEFT DANNY!!!”
The screech of his older sister rattled Danny to his bones, and the honking of a horn to their side forced the 14 year old into a panic- Slamming his own foot straight through his sister's transparent lower torso last minute and onto the brake pedal.
SCREECH!!!
“OOF!”
“Argh!”
Rubbing his head where it had rammed into the dashboard, and keeping his foot plastered firmly on the brake pedal- Danny Fenton could only stare out into the distance of the windshield, past the giant dent in the dashboard where his skull had rammed into, wearing an expression identical to the resident ghost girls own features, who now seemed to gain a semi balance of ghostly control and began hovering upwards from her place inside the diverse seat cushions. Floating above her seat, she let out a small noise as the sudden bout of weightlessness deactivated causing her to fall not so gently into her seat. Even so, the two shaken up teens continued to stare blankly outwards, both their hair now mussed up and windswept, trembling like leaves and for a few moments the world was silent.
The light turned green.
The sound of honking frantically from behind snapped the red headed teen out of her stupor, causing her to blink harshly a few seconds before shaking her head. Shakily, Jazz nudged Danny's foot away with her own and pressed onto the gas pedal, crossing the intersection only to stutter to a stop by the next curb, placing the vehicle in park.
Jazz let out a breath she didn't know she was holding and slowly turned to face her brother. Turning the key and pulling out, the red convertible stuttered to a stop.
“H-How do you feel about walking to school Danny?”
“Great. Fantastic. I could walk. Just as soon as my legs stop feeling like jello.”
Jazz could only sigh, glancing downwards at her own legs, which seemed to flicker a bit alongside the rest of her body. She shook her head almost somberly.
“You're telling me Danny… You are telling me…”
***
(And that’s all I got back then. lol)
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Person with awesome asexual flag in the background of their profile picture, "we" refers to us, the entire species of dojo loaches. Us dojo loaches have agreed on Jack is too stupid to make this specific pun. Jack has no knowledge of the lgbtqia community bc he would rather hunt ghost than learn about other humans. The loachies have spoken!
when my sibling came out as non-binary my dad being the most opportunistic dadjoker ever seized the moment without mercy and said-
"then I guess that makes me a trans-parent, my pronouns are who/where?!"
you cannot fucking tell me this isn't the most Jack Fenton ass response when Danny came out as trans
#you definitely misinterpreted the vibe#the vibe is dojo loaches rewriting Danny Phantom#welcome to the dojo loach corner of the Internet#we find the term canon gospel funny#we are writing the canon gospel#we have an HR department#the HR department is a gang of cory catfish#they have tiny knives for hands#dojo loaches rule the world
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This City’s Bo Peep is no damsel in distress. She is a sheep that can bites and barks, just like a wolf.
Dannymay 2025 - Day 5: Cryptid
#lunaverse#Niko Seraphina Corduroy#lunaverse oc#powerpuff girls rewrite#ppg au#danny phantom rewrite#dp au#dannymay2025#dannymay
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You know, if Danny Phantom ever got rewritten/rebooted and they wanted to include his iconic DP and circumvent the whole "let's recreate the portal accident just to give our hero a cool logo" thing, all they really need to do is have Jack and Maddie—the "name everything after ourselves" enthusiasts that they are—design each member of the family's jumpsuits with their initials. In fact, to prevent the fact that no one can tell both Dannys are connected no matter how obvious it is from becoming even more ridiculous, just like the accident altered his appearance, it could also alter the initials on Danny's suit. Maybe, they go from a simple DF, to the classic ghost-like DP we all know and love. You know, just a simple idea to include his logo without overcomplicating things or wasting budget money.
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i just feel like these two would have been the MOST insufferable daddy-daughter duo in the infinite realms
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Yesterday I couldn't sleep after seeing Dune in theatre so I made a Danny Phantom rewrite in my head. I always wanted the show to be deeper and more mature, you know, serious issues, learning how to navigate unwelcoming world and all that stuff. I ended up making it more angst lol. I already wrote most of first chapter but I'm super curious what would you change :>
So here's what I'm thinking:
Ghosts are "unfinished business" merged with plasma, intention so strong it lingers after death. When it meets ectoplasm, it changes into the shape of the intention + the owner of it. They're animated ectoplasm with a single goal: an obsession. The longer they exist, the less human they are.
Danny’s obsession is fixing, due to the fact he died trying to fix the portal to try to fix his family. He was unstable at first, lacking purpose, but once he realized he wants to fix his mistake and protect Amity, it stabilized him.
Danny accidentally opens the portal, and now it can’t be closed, since the off button is behind the portal. The ghost comes to the living world and Danny thinks it’s his fault. He feels the need to fix it.
Right after opening the portal he can't control his anger and fear as a ghost so he runs away to the forest and is found 5 days later.
Ghost don't belong in living world, just like humans in ghost, so they need to recharge in Ghost zone. Because Danny’s only a half ghost he just needs to be close the portal. If ghost consume their power entirely, they disappear, half ghost change back to human form, unless they force themselves/are forced to stay in ghost form.
Danny’s room is located above the portal, thanks to that he recharges while sleeping. + The room is space themed, because he loves space.
After the accident, he gets a bit paler than he was before. His pulse and body temperature are below normal.
There’s a Lichtenberg scar covering the right side of his body from the accident, going from his shoulder over his back, neck, and knee. It wraps behind the ear on his forehead, only delicately visible, but Danny covers it with his hair. He gets called Harry Potter puns, like closet boy, because of that.
His fangs are sharper and more prominent, even in human form.
At first he has problems controlling his strength, for example he bit a glass and shattered it by accident, because he was zoning out.
Accident triggered Danny's joint problems as well as injured his right knee. He suffers chronic pain, a headache disorder and mild cognitive impairments in memory, attention, and mood regulation. He had multiple physically aggressive outbursts since the injury, but he never hurt anyone.
Danny is mathematically “gifted”, Tucker technologically and Sam literary. That’s why people pick on them. From an outsider's point of view, they have it easier. After the accident, Danny is acknowledged as disabled, but he "doesn't look like he really is". They are different, and school achievements comes easy to them. Their parents are pretty neglectful, so they can do whatever they want. People get jealous.
Due to being a ghost you can't stare at Phantom too long, your brain will struggle to comprehend what it's seeing. The longer you spend with a ghost, the easier it is to see them. All ghosts are like that.
Ghost can finish their unfinished business and disappear.
I have many more ideas, but that's all I'm going say for now :>
So, what would you want to see in a rewrite?
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The Ghosts of Amity Park
Part 2
Danny could only dread this school year.
How was he supposed to go about nornal life when every now and then he'd just *poof* into thin air.
He'd gotten better at controlling it, but school was stressful, and stress tended to make his ghostly self take the wheel.
"Seriously, guys what if-"
"Danny freaking out isn't going to help," Sam asserted, wagging her finger at him like he was some sort if child.
He glared at her, glowy eyed and all. She hated when he did that, and he used that to his full advantage.
The consequences of her actions could bite her in the ass. They were already beating the shit out of him.
"You definitely can't do that at school," Tucker quipped, taking another bite of his ice cream.
Danny groaned, "Aren't you listening? I know! Thats the problem, I just start glowing or go invisible or- or I start floating! I swear its only getting worse."
Sam winced, drumming her finger anxiously against the sidewalk, "Maybe we should tell your parents?"
"Absolutely not! Are you crazy?! They'd flip their lids, for one- and then they'd probably go all experiment happy- I'm literally becoming the thing they hate!" Danny paused and stared into the empty road, "I am the thing they hate."
Tucker shook his head, "Dude you're parents love you. You're still their son, they won't hate you." He placed a reassuring hand on his friend's shoulder.
Danny simply shrank into himself, "...we can't tell them. Not till I get- this," Danny gestured wildly to himself, "under control."
Sam frowned, placing her own hand on Danny's back, "We'll help however we can."
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Thunder sounded, startling Danny from an already restless sleep. He sat up, senses telling him something was wrong.
It was more than thunder.
Danny acted on impulse; simply letting his feet take him where he needed to go.
The basement? Danny hadn't been down in the lab since the accident.
Now, almost two months later, he found himself looking at that energy conduit- but instead of a dark hole of copper and wires was a bright green glow.
His gut lurched.
A little boy stood in the center of the lab, the only indicator that he was not of this world? He was blue.
"Will you be my friend?"
Danny didn't know how to respond, the kid seemed pretty innocent, but he was also a ghost.
Instead he got closer, what was he even going to do with him?
"Do you have any friends?" Danny asked, figuring it'd be a bad idea to make any agreements with the dead.
"No, they all left."
"Well- that's sad," Danny paused. What was he supposed to do? He looked at the conduit, and back at the boy.
He hummed, reaching out his hand for the boy to take, "Do you know where they went?"
"I don't know," the boy sniffed, gripping Danny's hand.
It was cold as ice, frost crawled up his hand but it didn't hurt. Weird.
"Lets go find them," Danny walked towards the conduit, stepping into the green energy- something familiar filling his chest.
The world buzzed around him, and the boy next to him began to cry.
"You're not my friend!" The boy let go of Danny's hand and he ran into the the strange world before them.
It was warped and weird and Danny couldn't quite grasp it. It felt like it was trying to pull him in, but almost begrudgingly.
Oh come on, now he wasn't even good enough for the freaky spiraly nasty neon world that just...appeared.
Danny sighed, turning back the way he came.
As he stepped back into the laboratory, he noticed how different everything looked. Colors weren't the same everything was simultaneously less and more saturated; he felt like he had put on some funky sunglasses. His sense of touch felt dull- nothing was cold or room temperature, it was hard to describe but he felt nothing.
Should he be panicking?
Danny moved through space, but he didn't feel his legs moving.
As he passed the emergency sink, the mirror caught his eye.
Bright green eyes stares wildly at him, and he finally understood just why Sam hated it so much. His face and body were the same but he looked wrong.
Forget the white hair and green eyes, he was glowing and looked reminiscent of one of those insanely detailed cgi phantoms from a horror movie.
His breath hitched as he looked at his mouth. No- no it wasn't- it wasn't that weird green.
Danny opened his mouth wide, observing that his tongue and gums were in fact that same eerie green that glowed from his eyes.
He didn't like this. He wanted to be Danny again, not whatever this was.
He squeezed his eyes shut, "My name is Daniel Fenton, I am 16."
"My name is Daniel Fenton, I am 16."
"MY NAME IS DANIEL FENTON!"
Danny opened his eyes. He was back to normal. Blue eyes, black hair, reddish pinky gums- all was in order.
Danny sighed in relief.
Maybe it was a fluke.
Maybe he was dreaming.
He hoped he was dreaming...but he knew he wasn't.
This would be the last time he came to the lab.
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